The H1 needs improvement in my opinion. Is kind of confusing. Something simpler like: ‘monitor all your business dependences’. The image is good but maybe try to make it even more clear by showing that if a business depends on slack then it will get notified if it is down. Another option could be to record a video. I did it for the wbe space and it works well.
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writen by Tiago Ferreira