I would add a hint of what you’re offering. Maybe change it to your physical health forever instead of life. Otherwise it just seems like a spammy headline to me
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writen by James Trimble
In general I like it. Quite minimalistic and clear. I would just reduce typography variations: currently there are 4 of them: the big bold black text, the normal black text, the normal gray text and the normal blue text. 2 or 3 variations would be enough.
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writen by Aidas Bendoraitis
Thanks James and Aidas for the detailed feedback! I’ll keep these in mind next time.
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